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You are sand dune Jsi písečná duna
Contributed by
Aika
on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 09:22:07 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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You are such a sand dune
Warm and beautiful
Every wind pours you
And some carries away your grains
Shades of your life,
White Inocence and unaffectedness
Red is your heart
Yellow your soul sunrays
Sandstorm blew you on
Dispersed you all around
And I vainly look for places
Where your grains could find
If I were the whirl
To gather you up
Dune, which showed me kingdom
Which changed my world
I want to hold you in my palms
Never let you fall
Protect against storms
Pour you carefully and slow
And still I want you to know
Whether you are dune or just sand
I love you with all my heart
whether you are here or somewhere else
Ty jsi takov psečn duna,
Hřejiv a krsn
Kad vtr tě přesypv
někter odn pryč tv zrna
odstny tvho ivota
bl nevinnost a prostota
rud je tvm srdcem
lut v dui tv sluncem
psečn bouře tě rozdmchala
koukol tě rozvla
a j marně hledm msta
kde bych tv zrnka hledala
k bych byla vrem
co posbr tě zpět
dunu, je ukzala mi krlovstv
je změnila můj svět
chtěla bych tě dret v dlanch
nikdy nepustit
opatrně přesypvat
brnit před bouř
A pořd chci abys věděl
Jestli jsi duna nebo jenom psek
Pořd tě moc mm rda
Ať u jsi tu nebo kdekoliv jetě
Copyright ©
Aika
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2004-02-26 09:22:07]
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Re: You are sand dune Jsi písečná duna
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by lovingcritters on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 07:00:46 AM AEST
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Oh Aika......the tenderness, and depth of your love......unnumbered grains of sands in your dune! I got goosebumps with your exquisite wording and imagery!
Oh how beautiful your ways, Aika....they have to be in your heart first before you can write them down on paper!
love you
consue
the love for your friends is very moving! |
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Re: You are sand dune Jsi písečná duna
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by ladyfawn on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 04:42:03 PM AEST
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| such a loving caring sweet poem for a dear friend, unique ideas too, i love your poetry aika! keep writing! hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: You are sand dune Jsi písečná duna
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by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 10:25:43 AM AEST
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To have a place in a heart so wonderful and loving is truly an honour , something to treasure for a lifetime
Thank you
steve xx |
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