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Why is life so depressing
Contributed by
lildrama04
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Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 12:08:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
Lifepoems
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Why is life so depressing
Why does it always seem to take a
toll on your life.
Whenever you think about
it you seem to make feel really down
Whenever you are alone the depression
always seems to take a hold of you and
not let you go.
Why is life so depressing
Why does it always seem to take a
toll on your life.
Is it just some kind of Diesase
that people like me only have.
Is it just here to make us think
that the Devil wants to control our
soul.
Why is life so depressing
why does it always seem to take a
toll on your life.
Is it just some kind of Diesase
that people like me only have.
Is it just here to make us think
that the Devil wants to control our
soul.
Why is life so depressing
why does it always seem to take a
toll on your life.
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2004-02-26 12:08:08]
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Re: Why is life so depressing
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by norticus on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 10:38:06 AM AEST
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This was interesting, but I would definately go through and edit it a bit. Why is life so depressing why does it always seemt to take a toll on your life - is a little confusing. There are some other glaring sentence mistakes that I think with some proofreading would be eliminated. I give this a 2.8 on the Nortiscale.
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