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No last words
Contributed by
Shadow
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Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 05:36:17 PM in AEST
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No last words away with me
She ignores my dying plea
Away I walk through the cold
My own trail of tears a story not yet told
Every time I try to express my heart
Im pushed away and torn apart
Why won't you let me say
You are my love, night, and day
Is what I feel so hard for you to bare
To your mind is it such a dare
Where is the heart that would beat for me
To hear it once more is my simple plea
If this you wont do then end it here
My broken heart knows no fear
Show some mercy for pities sake
Dont let me carry both our mistake
Copyright ©
Shadow
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2004-02-26 17:36:17]
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Re: No last words
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by Remy on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 05:48:53 PM AEST
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pain is the precursor to strength... regardless of the idiots who do this, time does heal most things. i love the plea in this, sounded like me awhile back... ;0)
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Re: No last words
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by Arius-Inues on
Thursday, 26th February 2004 @ 07:48:36 PM AEST
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| Going threw it now and know what your going threw as well. very well written. |
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Re: No last words
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 06:25:51 PM AEST
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Well written..hope all is well now..
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Re: No last words
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by arden on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 11:51:23 PM AEST
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i love how it flows. wonderful write. keep it up.
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