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It Was I
Contributed by
wachumiri
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Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 02:09:23 AM in AEST
Topic:
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A drop has fallen
A drop of blood
A crimson stream
And now a flood
Whips lash His back
And slice His skin
Was all of this
For all my sin?
And now through crowds
While they scream out
The cross He drags
"To death!" they shout
Nailed to a tree
Through hands and feet
Now lifted high
That all might see
My sin is what
He hung there for
I wounded Him
His heart I tore
In agony
Right up to death
He cried "Forgive them"
With faltering breath
'Twas I who nailed Him
To that tree
I killed Him there
Yet He died for me
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Re: It Was I
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 02:13:24 AM AEST
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Watching "The Passion of the Christ".
David |
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Re: It Was I
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by emystar on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 02:24:36 AM AEST
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Wow, u did a great write here.
It's awesome!
It shows a deep understanding of his luv for all.
A masterpeice.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: It Was I
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by crimsondream on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 02:24:46 AM AEST
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| i love this poem. i love religious pieces. this paints a really clear picture for me. thanks..this was kind of what i need haha yes. keep sharing your talent with us :D |
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Re: It Was I
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by faith_my_eyes on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 02:40:38 AM AEST
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"Amazing love, how can it be,
that Thou my God, shouldst die for me?"
How did He die for us? We're not worthy.
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Re: It Was I
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by gothicangel on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 12:48:12 PM AEST
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Hi there David!
I love your work, you explain things so well in your poems! I am not a christian myself, but It is great to see people with faith! Keep on the good work! |
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Re: It Was I
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by eatfresh22 on
Monday, 26th April 2004 @ 02:29:07 PM AEST
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Wow! One of the first poems of yours that I read. The first poem created a brutally honest visual. I loved it. It inspired me to live every single moment for the one who suffered trememdously in order that I might be able to do so. Thanks for the kick in the butt!
~Carrie~ |
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Re: It Was I
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by Tanmaya on
Wednesday, 4th August 2004 @ 04:05:58 AM AEST
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| Very well-written. |
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Re: It Was I
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by anitajames on
Tuesday, 27th September 2005 @ 01:57:58 PM AEST
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This is a wonderful poem. Your spiritual poems are so touching.
Ann |
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