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Normally Deranged
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
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Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 01:10:02 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Normally Deranged
You should learn to stay away,
Ill only cause you pain.
Even if you like me first,
you will come to hate me.
I cannot say
precisely what happens,
and do not ask why,
but something changes to make you want to cry.
If I were someone
looking in, I suppose Id say,
that on the outside I am normal,
but then you go into my mind,
see what lies inside,
you notice just how strange I am,
my thoughts are really twisted.
They scare you and alarm you,
my morals disturbing.
You try to run away,
but I wont let you go.
I try to say Im sorry,
but my emotions are too deranged.
And when I finally let you leave,
I make your life a living hell,
revenge is all I think.
Perhaps this is why
people shrink away.
They see through the normality,
and see the darkness inside.
Copyright ©
WorthlesSanity666
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2004-02-27 13:10:02]
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Re: Normally Deranged
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by Lionel on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 01:32:11 PM AEST
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I feel sorry for you. I wish I could help. I've heard it said: - you are half way to the cure when you recognize, and admit the problem. Yet, "vengence is mine, saith the Lord." Luke 18:13" God be merciful to me A SINNER"
God Bless
Lionel
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Re: Normally Deranged
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by bj on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 02:00:03 PM AEST
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| last i heard tell, everyone's got a bit of the crazy going on in their head..everyone has secrets..everyone has demons...kudos! |
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Re: Normally Deranged
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by mercedes on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 02:18:27 PM AEST
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| You seem as "normal" as the rest of us on here. You will fit right in. Welcome to the site. I look forward to reading more of your work. |
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Re: Normally Deranged
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by Kie on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 09:41:36 PM AEST
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| Welcome to YPDC. We've all got dark stuff inside of us. Writing can be a great way to vent. I thought your poem was well constructed, expressed well and like Mercedes said you'll fit right in. I look forward to your next post. Kie |
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Re: Normally Deranged
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by Quilted_rag_doll on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 10:16:29 PM AEST
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great work. and we are all a lil deranged inside, even if we wont admit it, or are innocently unaware. Your no more deranged or crazy then the rest of the world. 'to be crazy, is to be messed up in the head, which is normal for humans...its okay, dont worry, your DEFINTLY not alone.' that is just a lil quote i made up, but its not half bad!? Take me for example; i am way beyond crazy n deranged. i don't know if there is a word for it?! (as you can see, i am having fun with the HTML) lol,anyways...good job, nice write.
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Re: Normally Deranged
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by blueheart on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 02:14:23 AM AEST
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| Welcome to YPDC, great poem. |
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