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My Brother John
Contributed by
trisha
on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 03:46:42 PM in AEST
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You Think You're Cool You Have Nice Wheels
Big Deal So Do I. Don't ForGet My Life
Was AlMost Taken Away From Me Also. I Face The Fact It Happen Let Me Help Let Me Help You Let Go. It's Been A Year Since It All
Happen. Every Since Janursday 19 Happen You Wont Let Me Drive. How Can I Face My Fears?
I Remember Like It Was Yestersday. The Radio
Was On Listening To The Bucs Play FootBall.
I Happen To Look Up."Told You Go" That's When It All Happen Almost To The Light We Get Hit We Didn't Feel A Thing Spinning Around Three Times We Hit A Pole Then We Stop. Your Head Broke The Door Window They Didn't Even Let Me See You.I Grab The baby. My Own Blood Laying In The road They Wouldn't Even Let Me See You.Feeling Alone Sad Angry This Is All My Fault I Told You To Go. How Can SomeThing Be My Fault When You Saw The SameThing. We May Fight Like Cats And Dogs. We May Need Space We're Always ToGether When We Need A Friend InDeed.
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trisha
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2004-02-27 15:46:42]
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Re: My Brother John
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 11:25:49 PM AEST
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Re: My Brother John
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 11:25:58 PM AEST
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| That was a great peom |
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Re: My Brother John
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by BrghtNSnshny on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 11:25:53 PM AEST
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| oh wow that was good..i don't know what to say, it was touching..*tear* |
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Re: My Brother John
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by emystar on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 10:58:15 PM AEST
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Sad but very good message here. Luv that last line, a perfect ending.
luv, huggs,
emy |
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