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INSOMNIA…
Contributed by
Kristina_Simpson_Stewart
on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 07:43:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
insomniac
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I lie awake at night
And my fears I try to fight
But nothing takes away the pain
I feel I am going to go insane
My mind wanders too fast
The hurt returns from my past
Why wont it go away?
How long must I pay
For ignorance and stupidity
All my faults become a reality
I cannot escape from this truth
That people in general are rude and uncouth
02-23-04
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2004-02-27 19:43:22]
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Re: INSOMNIA…
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 27th February 2004 @ 08:01:06 PM AEST
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| Great write. I can really identify, for I myself stay up many nights, plauged by horrible thoughts and memories. I love the rhyming, it seems so natural and unforced. I have a serious problem with that in my poems. hehehe..... I admire your talent. |
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Re: INSOMNIA…
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by Baronhawk on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 01:41:15 PM AEST
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| Somewhat of an imsomniac myself...ditto I say to your artful work here. I can relate to this. Anyway...nice work..you certainly did capture somewhat the general feel of an insomiac. |
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