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Neon lites
Contributed by
ruby1987
on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 03:00:41 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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Here I am
Alone
Again
In my room
My room
Is my cluttered
Freedom
My tablet of
E
Which saves me
Day
After
Day
Showing me
A world of
Excitement
And a world where
Its just me
Being alone
Is a drug in itself
Which has
Dumped me in my
Oblivion state
I come back
Again
And
Again
After the brutal
Treatment I receive
From society
My room
Is my peace
My tablet of
E
Setting me free
Out of exuberance
I dance
Higher
And
Higher
Addicted, alone
And astonished
At the
Neon lites
Whizzing around
Above my head
In my
Darkened cluttered
Room
Theyre
Dancing
To my groove
Taking me higher
Fly
Copyright ©
ruby1987
... [
2004-02-28 15:00:41]
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Re: Neon lites
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 03:04:43 PM AEST
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woo hoo! i,ve just had a wildejohnny moment i can really identify with this one awesome.
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Re: Neon lites
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by fallensilence on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 03:08:31 PM AEST
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| i think the content in this poem is awesome but im not exactly feeling the format you chose. either way its a really good poem. -david |
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