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So Alone
Contributed by
MorbidMongrel
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Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 05:01:34 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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I feel so alone
Sitting in this box
Cold pre-fabricated steel
Vaporous words assault me
Bleed me
Infect me
Wait not for the time to defend
Push me into myself
Relieve my friends from their watch...
Make it stop!
Movies in my head
Ceasing to remind me
I'm so alone
No one's around
Only me, and my cookie cut life
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MorbidMongrel
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2004-02-28 17:01:34]
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Re: So Alone
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by doug on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 05:07:09 PM AEST
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a great poem and hope you feel better soon
when i feel alone i like to break all the rules.
when i do that it gets me outta the box
keep up the good work your friend doug |
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Re: So Alone
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 12:55:47 AM AEST
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| Great poem, Ioved it! |
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Re: So Alone
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by Saitou-sama on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 01:07:44 AM AEST
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| This was awesome. I especially like the 'Bleed me, Infect me,' part. |
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Re: So Alone
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by Pyrofungus on
Wednesday, 15th September 2004 @ 08:46:28 PM AEST
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wow this is great bro...man does that remind me of what I was goin through...
please comment on my work too
summer |
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