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IF I WERE...
Contributed by
debbiethedreamer
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Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 10:01:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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If I were an Angel ... I would bring peace into your heart. I would transform the dove of peace into petals of rose scented with love, involving your life in an eternal valse of love.
If I were an Angel ... I would let the starred blue sky with the green of the oceans run through your mind and thus all your sadness would be washed away.
If I were an Angel ... I would write simple and multicolored words just how you deserve to be happy. And these words would never be erased...theyd be everlasting.
If I were an Angel ... I would make you believe that happiness will come and you wouldnt even realize the distressing moments that seemed infinite were just signals to strengthen your soul.
If I were an Angel ... Id witness your sweet smile become even sweeter and your kindness would be printed forever in other souls.
Dbora Villela Petrin (Debbie- The Dreamer)
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Re: IF I WERE...
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by ladyfawn on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 10:44:06 PM AEST
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| debbie this is beautifully written, simply lovely, warm welcome to ypdc too:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: IF I WERE...
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by lil_angel on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 11:04:40 PM AEST
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| Great write! |
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Re: IF I WERE...
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by jbrow on
Saturday, 28th February 2004 @ 11:40:49 PM AEST
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I like this one alot keep up the good work
p's
Gene |
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Re: IF I WERE...
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 12:35:03 AM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC, Debbie, the best poetry site on the net.
This is really beautiful.... I bet you ARE an angel to THAT special someone...
Jenni |
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