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Hallucinations Is The Begining Bit!
Contributed by
deathdrop
on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 03:09:59 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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every night,
every day,
she closes her eyes,
and sees people that die!
then again she lies,
watching them die,
coz this is her life,
and this is what a knife,
has done for her life!
she hallucinates with dead people,
with knives stuck in their heads,
and people that lie,
on the floor and cry,
and she sees the expressions on their faces,
as they die!
but she don't get no help,
and it does in her head,
and then she is found,
a few weeks later,
stabbed in the head... DEAD!!
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2004-02-29 15:09:59]
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Re: Hallucinations Is The Begining Bit!
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 04:20:33 PM AEST
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I'm glad that you found the strength to endure, this poem bought back some harsh memories, and the scars on my body are a even harsher reminder of my past.
but your poem has bought them back into reality, but it is a good thing, since I have tried to forget my past, and I think that is part of the reason why I have trouble excepting what life has to offer, but you have given me some inspiration, so I hope all is better for you now, and that life is giving you the break you have fought for.
Please take care of yourself, and if you need someone to talk to I'm here although only on occaision, I am still a good listener. |
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Re: Hallucinations Is The Begining Bit!
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by corrupted_minds on
Friday, 9th April 2004 @ 06:25:43 AM AEST
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welldone it's good, i think i understand how you felt from the emotions you show;d in this poem and i know that i can relate in scarey ways.good work
woei queen |
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