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touched
Contributed by
Pyro
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Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 05:37:26 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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life is torture feel my pain
flowing through his open viens
I view the blood moonlight seeping from his eyes
A tuch a kiss so deep
they are untuoched by all these lies
he is the true dark angel
a heart so much warmer than mine
he makes me hurt so bad its good
he plays games with my mind
i want to tuch his body i want to taste his soul
i want to feel him touch me
I WANT TO LOSE CONTROL
Copyright ©
Pyro
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2004-02-29 17:37:26]
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Re: touched
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by doug on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 05:46:35 PM AEST
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| very passionate keep it up your friend doug |
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Re: touched
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by jbrow on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 10:30:41 PM AEST
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I like this, this is cool. keep up the good work
p's
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Re: touched
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by arden on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 01:31:27 AM AEST
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hell yea. i loved this! its wow. good job
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