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Falling Into Feeling
Contributed by
WorthlesSanity666
on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 07:39:16 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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The pain and guilt is all too much,
I've had as much as I can take.
The thoughts and memories and such
I wish I didn't have.
I can't escape it.
I thought I had side stepped these feelings.
I'm falling into a bottomless pit.
The wave of emotions crashes over me again.
I try to hide,
I pull the covers over my head.
Through me fear does glide.
The feelings still reach me through the blankets.
I take a tack to bleed away my pain.
Trying to find a place on my arm to hide my cuts.
Briefly disappears the anxiety and shame.
But only for a short time.
The throbbing stops and I'm left again with nothing but my sorrow.
Inside I'm troubled and tortured.
I pray that I do not wake up tomorrow.
My emotional roller coaster never ends.
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WorthlesSanity666
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Re: Falling Into Feeling
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by Kindredblood_dragon on
Sunday, 29th February 2004 @ 08:06:08 PM AEST
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good write, I think dark is the right catagory, as this poem got it all sadness hate agony, and yet i hope it isnt something you are going through, I've been there already and I wouldnt wish it upon anyone.
Take care and keep on writing. |
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Re: Falling Into Feeling
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 05:25:57 PM AEST
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| wonderful expression of feelings, keep writing:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Falling Into Feeling
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by PRECIOUSBECKY on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:33:03 PM AEST
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MY BROTHER USED TO CUT HIMSELF TO FEEL OUTER PAIN RATHER THAN INNER
I HOPE YOU CAN OVERCOME- GOOD POEM KEEP WRITING |
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Re: Falling Into Feeling
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by Queen_Dolly on
Tuesday, 13th April 2004 @ 11:35:26 AM AEST
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Beautiful, emotive writing.
I could feel the despair as I read each line.
I enjoyed reading, thanks for sharing.
Queen_Dolly |
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