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Nightmarish Creature
Contributed by
moonstone629
on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 11:58:06 AM in AEST
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Each night I lay awake
Trying not to sleep
For when the sandman comes
The monsters start to creep
The nightmares race before my eyes
And I try not to scream
Because then I know I'll have to explain what is making me freak
The demon is familiar
I have seen him before
His scent, his feel, his soft features
Don't even seem like that of an evil creature's
Yet every time the sun sets
He plants himself by my side
He touches me in hurtful ways
And tries to take my pride
He calls me his little angel
And I am elated to know this is true
But if I am his precious
Why did he take my innocent youth?
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moonstone629
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2004-03-01 11:58:06]
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Re: Nightmarish Creature
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by desire on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 12:20:03 PM AEST
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| VERY VERY POWERFUL...IM GLAD TO KNOW THAT YOU FOUND STRENGTH TO WRITE ABOUT IT...I TOO HAVE WRITTEN SOMETHING LIKE IT...FEEL FREE TO CHECK IT OUT...PEACE WILL COME I KNOW BECOS I FOUND IT IN MYSELF..SLR |
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Re: Nightmarish Creature
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by a_bear on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 02:24:42 PM AEST
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| It's wonderful the way you turn such a terrible subject into a poem that is essentially a beautiful piece of work. (applauds) |
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Re: Nightmarish Creature
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by ladybug on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 02:31:23 PM AEST
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you are very brave to come forth i have faced the same thing and it took me along time to face them and to write how i felt very good but i must say keep your head up and know that you are strong in side and out please take alook at my poem called raped i think we have similarity know your not alone love ladybug
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Re: Nightmarish Creature
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by doug on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 05:16:14 PM AEST
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i also went through this though it was different for me . it takes a lot of fortitude to talk about such things let alone post it on here for the whole world to see. i admire your strenth your friend doug
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Re: Nightmarish Creature
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by Kie on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 11:49:51 PM AEST
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| This broke my heart. You are so strong and brave to write about such a horrific account. No child should be subjected to this. You touched my heart and I thank you for sharing this with us. Kie |
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