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Shred My Flesh!
Contributed by
deathdrop
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Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 02:19:34 PM in AEST
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i just keep self-harming,
cause a twisted force inside me, tells me to,
i can't stop bleeding,
cause it's my only way to get through.
people never notice,
so i went one step further today,
and now i have to keep my plaster on my arm,
to stop my wound bleeding again!
now i've realised i have P.E. tomorrow,
cause it's just "s*ds law",
don't think i'll be attending it,
my flesh is too tender and raw!
i'm soo sore inside!
i feel crucifed!
and i just can't deny!
i need the pain here, by my side!
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2004-03-01 14:19:34]
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Re: Shred My Flesh!
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by doug on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 02:35:00 PM AEST
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| well i wont try to cheer you up because you may not want me to . i try to give my true opinion of each poem i read and yours was full of pain . but your poem says you need this pain to get by. i myself have suffered through years of illness and i hope that for our sake we both find happiness. your friend doug |
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Re: Shred My Flesh!
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by dark_poetry2404 on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 05:20:09 PM AEST
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| Man. That was really good. I know how you feel. I really like that. Keep on writing. |
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Re: Shred My Flesh!
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by shelby on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 11:04:05 PM AEST
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sorry to see that your so miserable heart wrenching write
michelle |
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