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A girl
Contributed by
lildrama04
on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 03:33:22 PM in AEST
Topic:
Suicide
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She sits in the corner
of her room holding
A knife to her wrist
Aasking herself over
And over again
"Why was I put here"
"Why can't I just end my life"
As she holds the knife to her
wrist she looks at herself in the mirror
and all she can see is all the pain that she
is going through in her life.
She site there and wonders why
She can't just end her life but
Then she remembers the promise
that she made to the only person
that she ever loved.
She tries to pull the
Knife across her Wrist
But she can't
She sits in the corner
of her very dark room
Wanting to pull the knife
and watch her blood drain
To the floor
But what would people day about
her if she did
Would they say that she
was nothing but a freak
because she ended her one
life.
I just wish that I would
have been there for her
the day that she decided to
go through with it.
In Loving memory Of
Jessica Marie Jones.
Copyright ©
lildrama04
... [
2004-03-01 15:33:22]
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Re: A girl
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by kailadragon on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 03:43:02 PM AEST
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I know the feeling of loosing a friend......i had a good friend who set her house on fire and locked herself in a closet......i wrote the whole story in my journal if you want to read it......im sorry about your friend and that was a great write
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Re: A girl
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by doug on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 03:43:46 PM AEST
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| i have tried to kill myself with pills and whiskey and almost suceeded so your poem really hit home for me. a person that kills themself is fully aware of the pain it will cause other people or at least i was. its just that the pain we feel is so great that we cannot force ourselves to go on just to keep those peole from hurting. i have no advice for you and realize that even if i did you might not want it. i only hope that you somehow find happiness in your life. a really moving poem. your friend doug |
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Re: A girl
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by lildrama04 on
Tuesday, 25th May 2004 @ 01:03:35 AM AEST
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| Anybody who reads this it is about a friend of mine that killed herself so please leave a comment. |
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