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Orchard
Contributed by
merry
on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:05:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
InternetLove
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sunlight, like scotch whiskey
in the bottom of a glass
i was dreaming of you
walking toward me
in the orchard
the trees heavy with fruit
you were suntanned and smiling
i was wearing a blue dress
my hair blowing in the breeze
your arms around me
would they be protective?
your breath on my cheek
like a promise of heaven
we fit together so perfectly
all our imperfections
perfectly revealed
under the shady tree
where pleasure
became our paradise
passionfruit, we found it
love's succulent juices
we laughed with abandon
having found each other
in this strange and foreign place
what are the chances
we would
look into each other's eyes
gmm 2004
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merry
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2004-03-01 22:05:00]
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Re: Orchard
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by Angelic_Demon on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:22:04 PM AEST
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Hey...
I really like this one. Great write, good imaginary... Heh.
Blessed Be,
Mars |
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Re: Orchard
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by ladyfawn on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:25:19 PM AEST
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| mmmm dreamy!! so pretty, vivid, beautiful, simply excellent!:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Orchard
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by Former_Member on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 10:41:42 PM AEST
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i could watch it all unfold great write.
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Re: Orchard
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by DreamWeaver on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 05:23:46 AM AEST
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| Mmmm, sensuous and delightful ... Jan |
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