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Paradise
Contributed by
monkey
on
Monday, 1st March 2004 @ 11:54:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
fantasy
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glistening yellow
sun
reflecting off
crystal clear
water
falling into
beautiful white
waterfalls
far beyond sight
touching the crisp baby blue
sky
bridge-like arched
rainbows
adding a splash
of color
here and there
the calling
of animals
hushes
as the sky darkens
gleaming stars
appearing
one by one
dotting the sky
light rain falls
dampening
lush green
trees
everybody
everything
all safely resting
for the night
in the arms
of paradise
Copyright ©
monkey
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2004-03-01 23:54:35]
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Re: Paradise
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by arden on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 12:00:14 AM AEST
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i love this. it pulls you in, very nice. good job i enjoyed reading it. keep it up
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Re: Paradise
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by bj on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 12:14:25 AM AEST
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| its beautiful just as it is..like brush strokes on canvas..it paints the picture and the feelings quite well |
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Re: Paradise
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by emystar on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 12:18:12 AM AEST
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Heavenly!!!
strong, 2 the point, touching!
luv, huggs,
emy |
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Re: Paradise
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by shelby on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 12:27:56 AM AEST
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lovely there is nothing that needs to be changed in my opinion its flowing restful with great images
michelle |
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Re: Paradise
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by desire on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 12:39:06 AM AEST
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| beautifully written it just flows nicely from beginning to end, i can close my eyes and imagine all you'v said...great job |
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Re: Paradise
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by whisper-of-night on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 11:38:49 AM AEST
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| very very nice, it is fairytale-like, surely my girl will love this poem, mmm, can I show it to her?^_^ |
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Re: Paradise
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by Former_Member on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 08:43:16 PM AEST
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| cool! sounds like valinor. |
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