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Blurred Innocence
Contributed by
blueheart
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Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 07:37:32 AM in AEST
Topic:
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Grimacing through this emotional storm,
The gust of sorrow blinding my eyes,
Droplets of heartbreak raining down on me,
I'm barely coping with the turbulance of lies,
These tears are scalding like the heated sun rays,
And the chilling lonliness freezing the core of my soul,
Yet in the midst of calamity I see your blurred innocence,
And it flows upon me like a peaceful breeze,
Its glorious scent evoking a sense of serenity,
Thus completing my life with new found peace.
Copyright ©
blueheart
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2004-03-02 07:37:32]
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Re: Blurred Innocence
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by poetrygodslove on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 07:45:28 AM AEST
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| enjoyed your poem... sandy |
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Re: Blurred Innocence
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by Rakerman1999 on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 08:15:04 AM AEST
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Beautiful......gives me a good feeling to start my day with...
Very well done
Roses
Larry
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Re: Blurred Innocence
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 09:22:59 PM AEST
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| This was beautiful and surreal. I really liked this poem alot... Kie |
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Re: Blurred Innocence
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by ladyfawn on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 10:58:44 PM AEST
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| sweet write, funny how something can take us out of ourselves, bringing peace.... hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Blurred Innocence
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by positivelypurple on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:33:06 PM AEST
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| Lovely visual poem...nicely done! |
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Re: Blurred Innocence
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by Fionndruinne on
Sunday, 7th March 2004 @ 02:49:18 AM AEST
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I like your word choices here. Nice job. Keep it up!
Andrew |
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Re: Blurred Innocence
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by Soulless on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:11:23 PM AEST
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Breathe Taking. This poem has such good word choice. I love all of your poems so far. They all are dripping with such emotion.
Keep it up!
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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