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The Performance
Contributed by
desireemiote
on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 10:09:19 AM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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The envy
Holding back
In waiting
For its turn
While fumes
Of trembling
Nervousness
Intoxicate
Flying high
Unsurely
The fall
To comfort
Is far
Harmful
Yet needed
Then envy
Will take its toll
To humble
Make kneel
In awe
Make the intoxicant
Lose potentcy
As sincere
Honest
Humble
Comfort
Takes over
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2004-03-02 10:09:19]
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Re: The Performance
(User Rating: 1 )
by desire on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 10:32:09 AM AEST
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| i must say it was fun to read your poem it takes you on the journey of having butterflies in your stomache..its quite a nice style you have..i like it alot....slr |
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