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what i want from you
Contributed by
lostinmyself
on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 12:28:47 PM in AEST
Topic:
SadPoetry
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i want you to stop messing with my brain,
stop pulling me close,
then pushing me away,
i want you to stop the lies and the pain,
i want you to be true and never lie to me again.
i want you to leave or promise to stay,
i dont want you to go then come back the next day,
i want to be free,
from the hurt and the lies,
i want to have truth not lies in disguise.
i want to have you look in my eyes,
and tell me if your happy this way...
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2004-03-02 12:28:47]
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Re: what i want from you
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 12:33:37 PM AEST
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Great write. Isn't the feeling of getting it out great? What a catharsis. This is good. You have organized your thoughts and expressed them well.
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Re: what i want from you
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by Kie on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 04:08:01 PM AEST
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| Your poem echoed pain to me. You did an excellent job expressing it. This is my favorite by you so far. I commend you! Kie |
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