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Too much to handle
Contributed by
floo
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Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 01:24:19 PM in AEST
Topic:
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Too much to handle... Tension high
Confusion lingering.. Chaos threatening to fall
Admist it all... what to do???
Panic starting to rise...
There I stand and flee...For I can hear it calling...
Here I Am away from everything... Just me and my secret place
Don't need nothing else... no one else
And the rest of the world is left behind
Reality suspended...
The tension lowers The confusion dissappears
The chaos... it never falls
As I come to see what's inside
An empty shell...
My heart volid of emotion... for my soul died a long time ago...
The illusion of feeling long cast out
And I revel in the numbness... As I swim in the pools of nothingness
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floo
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2004-03-02 13:24:19]
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Re: Too much to handle
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 12:23:51 AM AEST
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Sounds like a very desolate, depressing, vortex of a place to be. I hope you see the sunlight soon. Life is too short to be unhappy.
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Re: Too much to handle
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 09:17:53 AM AEST
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| I have been there, I am there and others may not understand it but its a rough place to be. Do not give up! Writing poems can be a great vent. I could really relate to this one and if you ever need someone to talk to let me know. Kie |
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