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Change
Contributed by
kellros
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Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 01:50:35 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
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Poisened minds, dark dreams,
forcing your way through the ranks,
the every gripping grip of darkness yanks
It pulls and turns, till blood drips bold,
every drop counted and therefrom mold,
cloaks of gold, flasks of silver,
blood in the flasks and coffee cold
Flashes of insight, through the eyes of my demonkin,
bring me innocent lives, bring me those who sin
Seek thorougly... seek wisdom,
bring forward my breath onto my kingdom,
sing a song of laughter...
sing a song of slaughter...
after all you will sing a song how he was drowned in water...
After battles fought, a red mist covers the shroud,
death once had come, was now found...
But now old days have past, i'm past death, past all that were sound,
now i leave death and have taken up life instead..., this is where i'll stand my ground
No more shall i curse them...
still i will turn the skies dark... but no more i care for anyone else but her
all that there is now,
time for change has begun
Copyright ©
kellros
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2004-03-02 13:50:35]
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Re: Change
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by Stitch on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 01:59:31 PM AEST
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Woah. I have never seen new beginnings addressed quite this way. Very original.
Stitch |
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Re: Change
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by bernard on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 02:18:55 PM AEST
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| Good strong poem. A fresh idea it makes a change to the ordinary run of poetry. Have a great day now from bernard. |
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Re: Change
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by Fionndruinne on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 02:59:49 PM AEST
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Very strong indeed. I like the mystical style here... It reminds me of Celtic themes.
Keep it up. |
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Re: Change
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by Kellros on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 04:32:20 PM AEST
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| even though it is not aquired i'd appreciate if you RATE the poem... :) i want to see how i rate.... and maybe i'll realize that some of you actually care :) anyways.... i wish the best of days to all of you |
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Re: Change
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by loveisendless on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 05:24:20 PM AEST
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WICKED & WILD! THAT WAS REALLY COOL
THE WAY YOU WROTE THAT!! IT JUST DRAWS YOU IN,& DOESN'T WANT TO LET YOU BACK OUT!!!
LOL-DAN!!!! |
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