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The day the world changes
Contributed by
jc_92024
on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 03:31:09 PM in AEST
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todays the day the world changes
because my life will end
with no one to protect me
i will no longer pretend
so i grab the last part of my soul
twist it till it bleeds
then turn around and stare
at every persons greed
they think their so perfect
with everything they have
untill they lose it all
and have nothing else to grab
todays the day the world changes
because everything is lost
no ones left with anything
for the world is a world of cost
i lay here and await the end
so it can take me away
away from this poor world
that is only filled with pain
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Re: The day the world changes
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by Remy on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 03:33:41 PM AEST
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The angst-driven write of emotion, i'm glad i'm not the only emo-kid around here! good writing! ;0)
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Re: The day the world changes
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by arden on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 03:35:54 PM AEST
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love this! great great write. good job.
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Re: The day the world changes
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by Kellros on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 03:42:11 PM AEST
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| me 2... good write |
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Re: The day the world changes
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by Dawny on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 03:52:23 PM AEST
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Angry and emotional...great write
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