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My mother..rip
Contributed by
gothicangel
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Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 04:11:31 PM in AEST
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Don't cry for my mum that life has set free
a million mothers forever to be
Don't cry for my mum now in god's hand.
As she dance and she prance in a heavenly band.
She were mine as a gift, but never to keep
As she close her eyes forever to sleep
she's spirit unbound,on silverwings she fly
A million mothers against the blue sky
Look up into heaven, you'll see her above
the mother I lost, The mother I loved.
She was never your - she was never mine.
Don't cry for my mother
she will be back someday
When my time is gone, she will show me the way
Do you hear that soft whisper?
Close to your ear?
Don't cry for my mum
love the ones that are here
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gothicangel
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Re: My mother..rip
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by arden on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 04:14:21 PM AEST
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beautiful..wow. nicely done
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Re: My mother..rip
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by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 04:21:52 PM AEST
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Beautifully done.....and bravely written, wonderful attitude too! I'm so sorry your Mother died and had to leave you!
lovincritters
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Re: My mother..rip
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by Kellros on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 04:25:12 PM AEST
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good poem... sorry but your words seem empty... it's like when you wrote the poem you haven't fully realised within yourself that she is gone... it's like you were denying the fact to yourself... as soon you soon came to realize...
Maybe i'm saying to much tonight, posting to much of my thoughts... but tonight i feel like giving something back... :) |
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Re: My mother..rip
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by lil_angel on
Tuesday, 2nd March 2004 @ 05:39:17 PM AEST
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| Aww this is soo sweet! |
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Re: My mother..rip
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by gothicangel on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 08:42:44 AM AEST
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| thanks=) I know this poem seems a little empty.. but I thought about it.. and I like it this way:P |
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Re: My mother..rip
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by poetrygodslove on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 10:12:21 AM AEST
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| to late i cry... good poem i like how you write .. My mother is still with me. I think of her all the time. she lives a few hours away from me. I wrote alot of poems about her. I dont know what I will do if something happened to her.. thanks for sharing..s andy |
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Re: My mother..rip
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by Wachumiri on
Friday, 19th March 2004 @ 02:34:45 PM AEST
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We all hate crying, but sometimes you must. Sometimes you have to let it go.
Take care, hope you're ok.
David |
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Re: My mother..rip
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by Soulless on
Tuesday, 6th April 2004 @ 05:40:19 PM AEST
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Wonderful dedication to your mother. I hope things get better for you.
Kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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