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Breathe
Contributed by
ladyfawn
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Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 01:01:27 PM in AEST
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Life's garden filled of beauty, some pain,
Earth's hidden laughter, sunshine, rain,
When darkness falls dismal upon the soul,
And you feel a loss of all sanity's control,
When things have gone from bad to worse,
Your life seems no more than a curse,
Then look towards that brightest star,
Its light shines there for you, from afar,
A wealth of love and hope it sends,
It is the loving star of all your friends,
All stepping stones to finding your way,
Dreams and smiles of brighter days,
Counting with you dismal times of yesteryears,
Breathing happiness through all your tears,
Walk in your garden early each morn,
Smell the flowers, watch for the thorns,
And when you cannot quite understand,
Know your friends will help you stand,
Listen closely the earth is laughing,
Breathe deeply of this spirited air and,
Don't give up when the thunder comes,
Your garden cannot be undone.
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@->>->-
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ladyfawn
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Re: Breathe
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 01:19:35 PM AEST
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Beautiful write, Ness....sound advice...
Hugs and woofies..
Jenni |
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Re: Breathe
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by Rakerman1999 on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 02:31:01 PM AEST
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Beautifully written for a beautiful person. Your words are perfect and I hope it eases her pain.
Roses for my daisies
Larry |
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by fallensilence on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 02:47:34 PM AEST
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| wonderful poem. i love the message you're sending. -david |
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Re: Breathe
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by AliB on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 03:37:32 PM AEST
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Great poem Nessa,
Hope you are ok, true friends will always be around to pick you up when you are. Well thought out message.
Ali xx |
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Re: Breathe
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by Former_Member on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 04:25:22 PM AEST
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I really enjoyed this one. It's full of wisdom and poignant analogies.
Well done. |
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Re: Breathe
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by DreamWeaver on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 05:13:41 PM AEST
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| Delightful poem Nessa ... with an inspiring message ... beautiful write .... *daisies* Jan |
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Re: Breathe
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by Merry on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 05:24:05 PM AEST
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such a beautiful poem, thank you nessa - reading this was like getting a hug from my friends.
wiping away tears
daisymerry |
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Re: Breathe
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by LOWMAN613 on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 09:07:20 PM AEST
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| AAWW This was so special,well done on the feelings of Friendship! Christina |
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Re: Breathe
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by Kie on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 09:24:42 PM AEST
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| This just made my evening. You write so wonderfully Nessa. Kie |
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Re: Breathe
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by Cynthia on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:16:21 AM AEST
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| Nessa, this is a baeutiful write. *S* Cynthia |
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Re: Breathe
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by venkat on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:31:27 AM AEST
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| Beautifully written and it is very delightful.. loved it.. venkat |
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Re: Breathe
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by emystar on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 06:25:04 AM AEST
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An awesome Masterpeice!
luv it!
luv, huggs,
emy
thanks for all your comments on my work.
I'm playing catch up.
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Re: Breathe
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by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 05:48:34 PM AEST
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Wow hun, this was beautiful, inspirational and had such a lovely flow! and did i mention that it was sooo beautiful?
Keep writing hun, open your soul and let the words down then the words will be *almost* as beautiful as the person who wrote them :o)
Love 'n Hugs
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by Lone_er on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 11:57:44 AM AEST
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| Who can breate words more beautiful than this?...Russ |
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Re: Breathe
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by Cynthia on
Tuesday, 27th April 2004 @ 05:15:28 AM AEST
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| Nessa, this is wonderful. Your writes are marvelous my friend. I love the pic, it's cute. *hugs* *S* Cynthia |
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