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Condemned

Contributed by Solmyr1404 on Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 04:00:27 PM in AEST
Topic: MiscPoems

O, ye fickle one,
O, ye who hast shewn me
Temporary love.
I canst see with mine eyes
Of mine own heart,
Why hast thee condemned me?
Why hast thee forsaken
And hast also forgotten
That I still have love
For thee.
I beseech of thee,
Enlighten me.
Why doest thee
Hate me?
O, ye of the fickle heart,
O, ye who hast condemned me.

Copyright © Solmyr1404 ... [ 2004-03-03 16:00:27]
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Re: Condemned (User Rating: 1 )
by kailadragon on Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 03:43:39 PM AEST
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i like the old english tone.........adds a nice effect to the whole poem.

Kaila Dragon Seonte

Re: Condemned (User Rating: 1 )
by Essentially9 on Sunday, 21st March 2004 @ 04:04:18 AM AEST
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i prefer the medieval words also. i work in some in my works also, but i do not have the shakespeare genes in me to write in that tone!congrats on your writing skills

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