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Hawk Him and Hawk Her Jestřáb on a Jestřáb ona
Contributed by
Aika
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Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 04:53:49 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Hawk him and hawk her Together plough the skies he flies up and she flies down but cant separate their love
hawk him and hawk her both in love softly touching the wings when they fly
hawk him and hawk her sharp eyes inspecting see the others heart beat bills kissing
hawk him and hawk her lost amongst the rocks all you hear is echo of crying hawk woman
he is caught in draw-net whining, yelling she is on the other side cant hear him
amongst the rocks piteous cries no doubts they both died
hawk him and hawk her amongst the rocks only feather of them flying they both died, they were in love
Jestřb on a jestřb ona Spolu brzd oblohou Nahoru on a dolů ona Avak oddělit se nemohou
Jestřb on a jestřb ona Zalskovan Lehce dotkaj se křdly Kdy spolu ltaj
Jestřb on a jestřb ona Ostrm zrakem se prohl Vid druhho srdce tepat Zobčky se lbaj
Jestřb on a jestřb ona Ztraceni mezi skalami Je slyet jen ozvěna Plačc jestřb eny
On v zajet ptačch st Stn, křič Ona na straně druh Svho milho nesly
Zn mezi skalami alostn křik e oba zemřeli Nen pochyb
Jestřb on a jestřb ona Mezi skalami Peř jen z nich zbyl poletuje Zemřeli dva, z lsky..
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Aika
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2004-03-03 16:53:49] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Hawk Him and Hawk Her Jestřáb on a Jestřáb ona
(User Rating: 1 ) by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 07:58:59 PM AEST (User
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aika, unique, so sad yet lovely, excellent insight and style, ...and now they fly above rainbows? i would love to see you write more along this thoughtflow, its captivating:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Hawk Him and Hawk Her Jestřáb on a Jestřáb ona
(User Rating: 1 ) by lovingcritters on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 02:40:28 AM AEST (User
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Oh how tragic, like Romeo and Juliet!
Sad ending to a beautiful Loving pageantry!
I could see it all in my "mind's eye!"
Wonderful Aika,
love you
consue |
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Re: Hawk Him and Hawk Her Jestřáb on a Jestřáb ona
(User Rating: 1 ) by Puppy_dog_eyes on
Saturday, 13th March 2004 @ 10:36:34 AM AEST (User
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A beautiful yet tragic love story, told in an unusual way, yet so characteristically your style.
Thx for sharing
steve x |
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