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DREAM ME A DREAM
Contributed by
tashban
on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 07:03:56 PM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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Dream me a dream of what it could be
If no one polluted and pillaged our sea
Sing me your song of how we could feel
To walk through great forests and experience the thrill
Tell me a story of what they would say
If peace was a playground where children could play
Show me an emotion that doesnt exist
And ill show you devotion in a form of a wish.
Shed me a tear of the sadness you mask
And ill show you the joy that I could bring to your past
Show me your innocence and ill show you that child
Who brings us this world where no one can hide
Give us the strength to travel this road
To change the direction and carry this load
Of the damage we have done to this planet of earth
Who has given her all from the day of her birth
Show me compassion and I will show you the way
Of sharing together and loving each day
There is more to this life than dreaming away
The chamber of horrors that scatter our day
So dream me a dream of what will be done
Sing me that song that already is sung
Tell me that story of when we were so blind
And embraced our extinction and rekindled mankind.
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tashban
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Re: DREAM ME A DREAM
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by LornyaNarFuinenya on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 07:12:59 PM AEST
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| INTERESTING..thought provoking too I LIKED IT..nice job ;) |
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Re: DREAM ME A DREAM
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 03:58:35 PM AEST
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Welcome to YPDC..the best poetry site on the net....
This was very well done... it leaves the reader thinking deeply...
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Re: DREAM ME A DREAM
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 08:15:24 PM AEST
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Honest truth? it flowed well good sentence structure and a heck of a write.
of the damage we have done to this planet of earth,
Who has given her all from the day of her birth.
beautiful
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Re: DREAM ME A DREAM
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by MrWrite on
Monday, 15th March 2004 @ 03:28:08 PM AEST
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Sorry it took so long for me to comment on these. Anyhow, this was extremely well written, and you have a very distinct style which I enjoy immensely. I look forward to reading more from you.
Sincerely,
Mr. Write |
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