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Waiting for Dawn
Contributed by
calista
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Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 07:35:40 PM in AEST
Topic:
happypoetry
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Waiting for Dawn
March 2, 2004
You know those silent moments,
In the silent rooms,
In the silent house?
The ones where the only noises,
Are the faint breaths of your family,
Laying in bed dreaming?
The moments of darkness,
Just before light?
You know when the sun isn't showing,
Yet the sky is glowing,
Just before that great ball of fire,
Creeps over the hillside to welcome the morning?
Dawn.
You remember those moments when the only sound,
Was the occasional chirp of a beautiful hidden bird?
And you don't know where,
And you don't know why,
But the best idea is to simply cry?
For the silence and the dark,
Is the best place to embark,
The greatest feeling you can feel,
Love.
Love for the lands and the birds and the sight,
Love for the flowers that open at the light.
Remember the moments you smiled at the doe and her fawn,
Remember the moments you were waiting for dawn?
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calista
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Re: Waiting for Dawn
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by full_blur on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 07:38:44 PM AEST
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| this is very well composed and moving. You descirbe that moment very well. |
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Re: Waiting for Dawn
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by SpazzyMcGlee on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:32:48 AM AEST
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| i like it. i can almost feel the cool morning and see the sky. it really is a beautiful poem. i think youre really talented. why aren't you published? |
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Re: Waiting for Dawn
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by holderofthestone on
Friday, 18th June 2004 @ 01:36:25 AM AEST
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| great piece!! your words flowed so well very descriptive, and well felt. wonderful!!! A+++++ |
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