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She's Going Away
Contributed by
Exodus-On-Life
on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 07:40:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
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The highlights of tomorrow
Meet the tragedy of today
The wretched ways you live by
The awful things you say
Hate fuels your aggression
And it fills my heart with pain
I wish you'd leave my life alone
Never look back in on me again
Forget who I was
And who you used to be
Tragic is the sorrow
This tragedy that envelopes me
Suffocate my motives
Judge me as you will
These wishes wouldn't last for anything
I'd keep you even still
Drowning in deep water
So much left to compare
The pain has stricken me helpless
As I spin into despair
Conquered is my blindness
Bury escaping fear
It pains me to beg you
Just stay away from here
It kills me with every word
Ink meets paper with ease
Let me be alone for once
These insignificant thoughts, I beg you please
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Re: She's Going Away
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by MyInspiration on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:13:19 PM AEST
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| very good poem. very powerful and descriptive. your style in this genre of poetry is similar to mine own. |
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Re: She's Going Away
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by Eve on
Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 10:30:06 PM AEST
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The flow is wonderful, and kept my mouth hanging the entire time rather than a good portion of it. The words just spiral into the mind. Beautifully woven.
Keep writing,
-Eve. |
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