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Dont Take The Chance
Contributed by
blueheart
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Wednesday, 3rd March 2004 @ 11:26:00 PM in AEST
Topic:
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You're throwing off your dreams,
For nothing but that smile?
I cant believe you still have,
The naivety of a child,
You'll do all that you can,
To ensure you're equipped with love,
Just stop, you're wasting you're time,
He was never sent from above,
He'll break you're heart in two,
And stray off as days go by,
And before you realize,
Approaches your time for you to cry,
So stop and listen to me,
Who cares if you dont have one to adore,
Save yourself the agony,
Your life was much better before.
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blueheart
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2004-03-03 23:26:00]
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Re: Dont Take The Chance
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by Stalkee on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:45:49 AM AEST
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| short and to the point, i like that |
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Re: Dont Take The Chance
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:59:32 AM AEST
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| dearest hanna, great message here for your friend, wonderfully expressed:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: Dont Take The Chance
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:21:48 AM AEST
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BLUE BUT TRUE AS YOU WRITE POETRY
AS A VIEW! NICELY WRITTEN WITH NOTHING MISSING!!
DAN!!! |
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Re: Dont Take The Chance
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by Avarice_Riot on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 08:52:18 AM AEST
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| Very powerful message there, it'd be a crying shame if the person you're directing it to doesn't heed it. Thank you for reviewing my poems. |
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Re: Dont Take The Chance
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by Rakerman1999 on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 09:02:42 AM AEST
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and the congregation said " AMEN" Sometimes an empty heart IS better than a broken one.
Very ,very well said.
Roses
Larry |
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Re: Dont Take The Chance
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by Qohinoor on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 02:13:32 AM AEST
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| Talk about love's sorrow...verily true. |
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Re: Dont Take The Chance
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by Kie on
Friday, 12th March 2004 @ 11:17:51 AM AEST
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Yesssssssss! I believe this is the first i've read on this topic. Very original. You are so right, I just want to yell--"This poem is soooooo true!"
From the title to the ending it was not only original but very well written. I commend you.
Kie |
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Re: Dont Take The Chance
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by Soulless on
Friday, 26th March 2004 @ 10:09:22 PM AEST
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I love poems with hidden meanings. To me this poem can be interperated in so many ways. I love it. Great write.
kisses,
~Soulless~ |
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