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~Maybe~Baby~
Contributed by
Cobalt
on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:39:34 AM in AEST
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I see a place
where time stands
still for us.
I know a way
for us to walk together.
Found a place to be.
I want you here
standing next to me.
Please hold my hand
help me through it all.
I swear that I'll
love you forever.
Just let me in.
Let me hold you close.
Let me be the
love you need and want.
One chance all I ask
down on both knees.
Raven's Sin
Copyright ©
Cobalt
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2004-03-04 00:39:34]
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Re: ~Maybe~Baby~
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by Stalkee on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:40:59 AM AEST
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| I've found my place in this spot before...just too bad I can't express myself as well as you =) great write |
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Re: ~Maybe~Baby~
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by loveisendless on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:51:05 AM AEST
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PRETTY & ROMANTIC! LOVE IS ENDLESS!!
GREAT POEM!!!
DAN!!!! |
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Re: ~Maybe~Baby~
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:54:54 AM AEST
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| heartfelt and sweet poem:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: ~Maybe~Baby~
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by venkat on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:51:03 AM AEST
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| Good poem.. venkat |
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Re: ~Maybe~Baby~
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by AliB on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:17:17 AM AEST
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Ahhhh, bless you, wish somebody felt like that about me, lovely sentiment, great write.
Ali xx
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Re: ~Maybe~Baby~
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by Kie on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:03:58 PM AEST
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| Romantic, honest, sweet and very touching in a refreshing way. May all your dreams come true and may they be all that you wished for in your poem. Loved this one. Kie |
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Re: ~Maybe~Baby~
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 08:12:04 PM AEST
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| very nice Jeff... |
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Re: ~Maybe~Baby~
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by poetrygodslove on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 05:15:55 PM AEST
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| aweeeeeeee beautiful. give the poem to her.. she will be nuts not to take your hand.......sandy |
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