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Insomnie
Contributed by
kyle
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Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 04:18:16 AM in AEST
Topic:
EmotionalPoetry
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I turn out the lights and prepare for sleep
My eyes can focus on only the dark
I try the usual of counting sheep
Outside the window I hear a dog bark
I watch the clock and there goes the hours
My back starts to hurt as I toss and turn
Awake I will be until my shower
Inside my eyes I can feel the burn
I start to hear noises outside my door
Perhaps its caffeine that keeps me awake
People are awaking on the next floor
Is my insanity ready to break
This is not a place I have never been
Insomnia, I will see you again
Copyright ©
kyle
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2004-03-04 04:18:16]
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Re: Insomnie
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by Dawny on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:05:34 AM AEST
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Good descriptions!!
I had a brief spell with insomnia last years....never again!!
Really good poem, keep em coming
Love Dawny x |
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Re: Insomnie
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by loopylou on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:31:38 AM AEST
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| hey good poem i think id apreciate it better if i knew waht insommina was would anyone care to email me the meaning of it please? |
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Re: Insomnie
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by arden on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 01:37:58 PM AEST
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this is awesome! iv always suffered from Insomnia. i really love how you made it all flow. really really good job!
Arden |
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Re: Insomnie
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by katyqueen35 on
Thursday, 11th March 2004 @ 02:55:22 AM AEST
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| I know how you feel i get that all the time at least 4 to 6 nights a week.Insomnia is hust so bothersome .I tryied sleeping pills before it just made me more tire in the day time.good poem. |
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