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some things aren't what they seem
Contributed by
loopylou
on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:18:09 AM in AEST
Topic:
Haiku
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you were something that i always always wanted
something i had always always craved
but my new found popularity and dream
just weren't the same
it's not what it looks like once you're in the clan
i found it very hard to enjoy my life long plan
so stick your smoking
and stick your drugs
because i've decided i've had enough
it's just getting boring
why don't you try something new
like get a job
or find something decent to do
i wanted to be part of it all so bad
but you're all insane
and now you're driving me mad!!!
so i leave you all alone now
as i wander on down track
and looking at you isn't worth turning my head back
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loopylou
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2004-03-04 05:18:09]
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Re: some things aren't what they seem
(User Rating: 1 )
by Bohemian_with_a_pen on
Monday, 10th January 2005 @ 05:58:25 AM AEST
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| um........ no offence or nutin but how is this haiku? |
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