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i miss you
Contributed by
loopylou
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Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:47:10 AM in AEST
Topic:
FriendshipPoetry
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i miss things like they were
the days we use to walk miles to the streams in the summer
even though we were fully aware there was a swimming pool just down the road
it was all about the adventure and excitment
we'd try anything new
now we've lost the adventure and the excitement
but what's worse is i've lost you
i remember our pact to always be together
haunted words make me sweat on these now lonley summer days
forever and eva
i remember video nights sneaking in just a bit of vodka in our drinks
just to make us feel that little bit older
now we are older
but where are you now
in a club hanging around with a different crowed
i know this is reality at its cruel best
but anything i'd give to give my pining heart just a little rest
but now the winter's nights are setting in
and gradully the evenings get darker
i lose just a little hope
i wish we wre swinging over the stream in that old tyre on a rope
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Re: i miss you
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 07:02:01 AM AEST
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| Aww loopylou, this poem is very sad and full of emotion. I can't type much, as I'm getting Carpal Tunnel Syndrome, but this is an amazing poem. I loved it. |
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