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PAIN
Contributed by
PRECIOUSBECKY
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Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 12:35:04 PM in AEST
Topic:
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IT'S ALL AROUND ME
I HEAR IT IN THE BANG FROM THAT GUN IN YOUR HAND-
I FEEL IT IN THE BLOODY KNIFE YOU STUCK THROUGH MY HEART-
I SEE IT IN THE DIRTY FACE OF THE ABANDONED CHILD-
I TASTE IT IN MY BITTER TEARS-
I SMELL IT IN THIS ROTTING LOVE................................................................................ PAIN
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2004-03-04 12:35:04]
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Re: PAIN
(User Rating: 1 )
by Remy on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 03:20:30 PM AEST
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sounds like you got served a few too many times, but this is a agood writing! I like it! ;0)
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Re: PAIN
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by ChaosBound on
Wednesday, 17th March 2004 @ 01:48:19 PM AEST
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WOW.... what pain, i feel for you...
Thank you.
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