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Dear Dad
Contributed by
jc_92024
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Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:20:52 PM in AEST
Topic:
AngryPoetry
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Dear dad,
Take a look around you
Dont you see that Im no their
Havent you noticed Im missing
Or maybe you just dont care
Dont you feel a hollow hole
Where your missing son should go
Ive been sit here so patiently
Awaiting your hello
I cant take it anymore
Not having a father by my side
And you act like Im gone forever
Like I was never there like I never cried
Well you wrong Im here to stay
To be strong forever
Im here without you and your advice
Knowing ill be better
Copyright ©
jc_92024
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2004-03-04 14:20:52]
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Re: Dear Dad
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by Remy on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 03:18:23 PM AEST
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The strength in this speaks volumes... glad you wrote this, thanks for sharing it! ;0)
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Re: Dear Dad
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by Jenni_Kalicharan on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 03:50:11 PM AEST
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Really touching...
(Don’t you see that I’m no their..should read
I'm not there)..Just an observation....
Jenni
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Re: Dear Dad
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by Juggalette_chick666pk on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 11:36:31 PM AEST
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| Hey I can relate to your poem so much, I wish my dad was here more often..well hang in there okay? |
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