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The night something went wrong....
Contributed by
kellros
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Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:27:13 PM in AEST
Topic:
psychoticpoems
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This was the night something went wrong...
as normal as any night could be....
moonlit beams on the window plane...
once he was calm... now he's insane...
he throws a fase, it breaks loudly against the wall,
his terrifying voice echo's across the hall...
look what have i done...
it's cold now... there are no sounds...
as quiet as the breeze of death blows through the window....
Holding his hand out front... trying to undo what he has done... it's to late now.... she's gone....
hope it never comes to this.... tears run down his face as he stares into nothing... seeking comfort in nothing... the pain so overbearing, wishing it never came to this... that he could undo what he has done... it's to late now...
she's gone
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kellros
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2004-03-04 14:27:13]
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Re: The night something went wrong....
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 02:34:01 PM AEST
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Pain. Nakedly apparent. Wow. Intense stuff.
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Re: The night something went wrong....
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by dark_poetry2404 on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 04:11:58 PM AEST
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wow. good and intense. keep writing
~*~silent tears, silent cries, silent fears~*~ |
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Re: The night something went wrong....
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by alecfernadez on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:15:44 PM AEST
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wow as sed above, this is really intense, and at the same time, it potrays this kinda mystery around it, where the reader can draw conclusions, yet the answer is one you know.
Incredible rite |
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