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Memories
Contributed by
gothicangel
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Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 03:26:33 PM in AEST
Topic:
LostLove
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Many nights I pray,
wishing you would stay.
Loneliness is tearing me apart,
I wish I could be that smart.
Because losing you was the worst thing I could do,
but I know you know I had to.
I wish we were ment to be.
The fault, I know, was me.
Looking through your eyes in my sleep,
God knows I miss you so terrible deep.
We made memories so good,
what was it I never understood?
That love would fail,
I would rather be put In jail.
But I know that when we die,
we will meet again and and together we will fly.
So no matter what we do,
In my dreams there is just room for me and you.
Astrid Elise Grov
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gothicangel
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2004-03-04 15:26:33]
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Re: Memories
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by Remy on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 03:27:47 PM AEST
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Aww, i like dreams like that... that last line is stellar! Good writing! ;0)
~Remy~ |
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Re: Memories
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 03:47:27 PM AEST
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| awww, its never easy, may you find happiness..... hugs n' love nessa |
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by Former_Member on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 03:57:59 PM AEST
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great write, keep it up!
Alicia Marie
~*SAT*~ |
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Re: Memories
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by arden on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 04:41:58 PM AEST
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perfect. wow so good. i really really like this one i think maybe its my favorite out of all of your work so far. wonderfully done.
Arden |
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Re: Memories
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by poetrygodslove on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 10:05:26 AM AEST
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| another good write. i enjoy your work it take much to understand.. and I have been there.. I will pray for ya myself that GOD opens the door to your relationship again if he wants it to be.. and I want him to keep it close if he has another instead sandy |
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