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A Chlorine Day of Wonder
Contributed by
kayald
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Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:16:29 PM in AEST
Topic:
goodbyepoetry
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A blanket, a sleeping bag, and a wet flip-flop
A chlorine reminder that you are there
Lying between the pool and snow that wont stop
We both know the day will end, but for now we dont care
Falling asleep to the sound of the splashes
And the muffled crowd that cheers
You give butterfly kisses with your eyelashes
While onlookers scorn in empty jeers
Card games, music, and other peoples voices,
Surround us throughout the morning
And later we finally make our choices
And pleasure comes without any warning
Who cares what they say? I silently think
They dont matter, theyll go away.
Maybe next time I can remember to blink
And then Ill know what Im supposed to say
Meaningless now, a strangers arms
Wrapped around my soft skin
Smooth talking with multiplying words of charm
Of how were meant to meet again
No doubt concealed in my mind
That this time is the last
For as I walk away, I leave it all behind,
And it will remain lost forever in my past
Copyright ©
kayald
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2004-03-04 17:16:29]
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Re: A Chlorine Day of Wonder
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by Remy on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:19:00 PM AEST
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I'd say fix that distance problem... if you know what you want, then go for it. distance is complex, but not the issue... i like this writing by the way... lol!! ;0)
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Re: A Chlorine Day of Wonder
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by intelectualpoet on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:36:26 PM AEST
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WOW, very nice, I agree, you should try and fix that distance problem, and if it is unrealistic at this point in time, then stick it out, dont let the physical space, turn into space within your hearts.
Keep your head up,
MAC |
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Re: A Chlorine Day of Wonder
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by alecfernadez on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 05:40:39 PM AEST
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wow, a touching sad yet beautiful, and well written poem with great anologies!
Keep up the gd wrk |
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Re: A Chlorine Day of Wonder
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by SpazzyMcGlee on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:22:06 PM AEST
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| i like it. i know what its like to have a "just a friend" whose too far away to see as much as id like. |
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