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fly away
Contributed by
lostinmyself
on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:26:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
DarkPoetry
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i will walk here in solitude and darkness,
never knowing or finding my way,
i will sit here totally loveless,
until i find my light one day.
i know that there will always be darkness,
but i will always hope and pray,
i will sit here always waiting,
and i will find my light one day.
and on the day i find it,
i will spread my wings and fly away...
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Re: fly away
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by lola on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:28:24 PM AEST
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i really enjoyed your poem.
i'm hoping i find someone that's just right for me some day!!
lola |
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Re: fly away
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by Stitch on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 06:30:42 PM AEST
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I see your writer's block is fading. Nice stuff. Definitely a portrait of a moment in time.
Stitch |
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Re: fly away
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 07:09:13 PM AEST
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| I really liked your poem. I loved the descriptions especially- dark, yet hopeful at the same time, & so true. I love your style of writing. Keep it up! |
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Re: fly away
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 07:30:46 PM AEST
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| this is exceptionally beautiful, whistful, hopeful, serene in its sadness, hugs n' love nessa |
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