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In the Mirror
Contributed by
danimus
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Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 08:38:04 PM in AEST
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Mirror's image is the flipside to things
Looking back into your mental make
Studying and reading what you bring
When composures wait until you brake
Two similar objects break each other down
Staring at them when they're awake
But placements in front isn't letting them around
The internal dual is about to make you ache
Could you face yourself without guilt?
Change your ways and begin to think
When your veins are filled with filth
Unless you let your worlds crumble and sink
If your skin is fake..
In the mirror, I see, A wonderer,
Questioning everything including himself
If you do not answer, things rumble like thunder
But as I look, I extract my wrongs and nothing else
Such a sketchy situation to paint and erase
A dying victim under the skin's mold
Oh, the change in color of your face
Is your life being led or is it on hold?
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danimus
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2004-03-04 20:38:04]
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Re: In the Mirror
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by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 08:43:35 PM AEST
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thought provoking write... I like that...
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Re: In the Mirror
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 09:29:55 PM AEST
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Nice write I like that one.
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Re: In the Mirror
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by Whisper on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:37:36 PM AEST
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Strangely Drawning.
Interesting write.
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