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December's Masquerade
Contributed by
ARemoteHeart
on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 08:41:41 PM in AEST
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An instance of an unkind wind,
Running close behind him.
Slowly, Steadily, Swiftly,
He is an unsung champion,
Who will finish first this year.
His heart is an open wound,
Blood, pouring out as a band of snowflakes
Each sentiment matchless.
I examine this masquerade,
Knowing I could never join this deception.
I can see him, but I do not recognize his face.
I can feel him, although he is impervious.
One feature in this story, true,
Is that he will depart, he'll leave me soon...
Showered in a delicate flurry.
Copyright ©
ARemoteHeart
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2004-03-04 20:41:41]
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Re: December's Masquerade
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by ladyfawn on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 09:00:29 PM AEST
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| oh this is a fine write, captivatingly enchanting, i would likely place it under dark poetry but thats me, warm welcome to ypdc, am off to read your other poems:) hugs n' love nessa |
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Re: December's Masquerade
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by desire on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 09:34:18 PM AEST
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| i like this alot..i like the way it flows...keep them coming...slr |
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