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Notice me
Contributed by
annabell
on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:29:46 PM in AEST
Topic:
SecretLove
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Do you notice me?
When you walk in a room you're all I see.
For your smile,
you know I'd walk a mile.
They tell me I should just give up.
You and me all it would cause is gossip.
They can't see that I love you,
and I think it's time you knew.
Would you give me the time of day?
Just hear what I have to say.
I could be a blessing in disguise.
You never know what might be.
As a couple we might be lovely.
Copyright ©
annabell
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2004-03-04 22:29:46]
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Re: Notice me
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by desire on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:43:59 PM AEST
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| this is cute i like it alot ...it kind brings back memories when i felt the same way...slr |
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Re: Notice me
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by Asatru on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 02:00:31 AM AEST
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| I really want a poem like this to be about me. (I like a girl in my english class - lol) Theres a few poems I've read on the site recently where it's the exact opposite of me, like this one, I like a girl in my english class and you like a guy in yours, and they make me hope this is how the other person feels. Good write. |
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