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A liquid pool of dreams to find
Contributed by
danimus
on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 10:51:08 PM in AEST
Topic:
DreamsandWishes
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In the morning, A new day has arrived
Opening my eyes, A reflection of conforming
I focus on my moments that survived
The nights resting dreams transforming
Leaving hours behind, The great distance I've gone
Under my pond, A liquid pool of dreams to find
I've got more than time's only song
Seeing is believing even if I was blind
Enjoying my unconscious, A silent sound rebellion in sheets concealing
While in retreat, A breath of peace but anxious
To awake and reconstruct a discreet feeling
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danimus
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2004-03-04 22:51:08]
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Re: A liquid pool of dreams to find
(User Rating: 1 )
by Daniela_Maria_Violin on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 10:26:52 AM AEST
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wow, I really like this... you've got talent
looking forward to more from you... |
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