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Just playing
Contributed by
Whisper
on
Thursday, 4th March 2004 @ 11:41:14 PM in AEST
Topic:
ChildrensPoetry
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The Cosmic kitten skates across the ice and falls across his pal, Sir up Sir a gus.
Between two Moons they frolick and play Not noticing at all, that ones small and ones big
They roll over each other and they pull at each others ears And then they burst out laughing, until they 're in tears.
They lay on back and look up at the stars And one turned to the other and wondered How many there are ?
So they both started counting and the numbers came mixed They giggled some more when they both got 7645966. Whisper
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2004-03-04 23:41:14] (Date/Time posted on
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Re: Just playing
(User Rating: 1 ) by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 06:09:35 PM AEST (User
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liked it really original.
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Re: Just playing
(User Rating: 1 ) by arden on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 09:58:40 PM AEST (User
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aww this is really cute. i love it. great job keep it up!
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Re: Just playing
(User Rating: 1 ) by Wrybod on
Sunday, 14th March 2004 @ 07:32:15 AM AEST (User
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I'm not sure i got the sense in this. Maybe there wasn't any to get. Just fun..............
anyway it transported me back through time..........and that was nice.
I know i keep telling you about similar poems I've written. I hope you don't mind.
The nearest I got to this sort of thing was
"That first kiss"
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