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Do you have any idea?
Contributed by
Wolfchild
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Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 03:53:42 AM in AEST
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Do you have any idea how much I hate you?
Do you have any idea how much I loathe you?
Do you know much it would mean to see you cry?
Whatch my own tears start to dry.
See the rivers that are flowing down my cheek
Take another look you'll find I'm not that weak
I'm standing tall, I'm standing over you
To whatch you crumble would be such a view.
Feel the burning deep within,
It's the hate that shouldn't have been
Just to turn and walk away
Couldn't make me a better day.
Copyright ©
Wolfchild
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2004-03-05 03:53:42]
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Re: Do you have any idea?
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by charmer on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 09:11:00 AM AEST
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Oh my gosh this poem is so good! I wish I could write a poem like this one!
Best wishes,
Chelsea |
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Re: Do you have any idea?
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by WorthlesSanity666 on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 08:44:29 PM AEST
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| I have a bit of the same thing going on. Your poem really helped me. I hope your relationship gets better though... Great poem. Great expression of feellings. |
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Re: Do you have any idea?
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by LouisaMontagu on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 11:15:35 AM AEST
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Voiced - From the heart id imagine, which is hard as u dont feel love, but it still hurts tho.. Iv written a few of my father, ur words n feelings I have been there.... feel free to have a read of my ones....
Well Done
Louiza xx |
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