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Milyas
Contributed by
LornyaNarFuinenya
on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 12:25:11 PM in AEST
Topic:
LovePoetry
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A pinpoint of light
Crawling slowly across the deep chasm of night
Shining brightly many miles away
Flickering in and out along its way
An unknown traveler is that little light
Making its way through a deep blue to an inky black night
The unknown traveler fades in and out of view
They may be coming home
I wish it was you
For my spirit will roam
Untill you come back
My life is like the night, a vast chasm of black
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LornyaNarFuinenya
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2004-03-05 12:25:11]
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Re: Milyas
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by whisper-of-night on
Tuesday, 9th March 2004 @ 09:34:17 AM AEST
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longing, more longing, and still, you are waiting..... 'Untill you come back/ My life is like the night, a vast chasm of black'..... poor soul.....
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Re: Milyas
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by Fionndruinne on
Wednesday, 10th March 2004 @ 05:09:32 PM AEST
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Great poem! It's very heartfelt. Do I detect Elvish somewhere?
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