|
 Menu
|
|
|
|
|
Social
|
|
|
|
|
A Question of Life
Contributed by
baronhawk
on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 03:02:12 PM in AEST
Topic:
oops
|
Beyond vision
in vivid clarity
in absolute silence
I understood completely
the cost and credence
of successful continuity
within the compliance
of my ambiguity
the threshold of dreams
sheltered ambitions
unbounding the thrills
of current notions
within the outskirts
of intellectual persuasion
lies the scourge
of familiar reason
inside the heart
of logical collusion
sits pride
the corrupting passion
upon fate's brow
the mantel of infinity
on the prowl
the reins of destiny
to live and to feel
of love and its loss
to hurt and to heal
understanding its costs.
Copyright ©
baronhawk
... [
2004-03-05 15:02:12]
(Date/Time posted on
site)
Advertisments:
|
|
|
|
|
|
Sorry, comments are no longer allowed for anonymous, please register for a free membership to access this feature and more
|
|
All comments are owned by the poster. Your Poetry
Dot Com is not responsible for the content of any
comment.
That said, if you find an offensive comment, please
contact via the FeedBack Form with details, including poem title
etc.
|
|
|
Re: A Question of Life
(User Rating: 1 )
by MrWrite on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 03:38:54 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| Wow. Wonderful use of imagery here. I really enjoyed reading this. |
|
|
Re: A Question of Life
(User Rating: 1 )
by Lionel on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 03:54:18 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
| An absolutely excellent poem. Best I've read in awhile. Thanks. |
|
|
Re: A Question of Life
(User Rating: 1 )
by Former_Member on
Friday, 5th March 2004 @ 06:08:52 PM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
I don't see a question, but I do see an answer: It is life as life is meant to be. It is a gift from God, make the best you can of the gift.
Rita |
|
|
Re: A Question of Life
(User Rating: 1 )
by Kie on
Saturday, 6th March 2004 @ 03:34:29 AM AEST
(User
Info | Send
a Message)
|
"to live and to feel
of love and its loss
to hurt and to heal
understanding its costs. "
A perfect ending.
All I can say is wow....
You know what? This poem was wonderful to read.
Kie
|
|
|
|
· 
Poetry
Site Help
Members
Areas
Reference
Search
Top
Others
